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Saturday 20 January 2007 |
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| continue the story of the girl... |
He had continued on his way,but he kept thinking about what she had been doing there. And if it was true that she had had a row with her boyfriend, why had they had a fight? And still, there was another thing that didn’t make any sense, why was she just wearing a thin dress on a cold winter’s evening?
That mysterious girl had stayed in his head all night, so, the next day, he had decided to go and find her. He had come back to the road where he had found her, but it seemed she was a ghost. No signs of that young girl.
When he was about to gave up, he saw her. She had noticed he was there, but she had just smiled and had disappeared again. What was she trying to do with him? Did she want him to follow her? He had thought so and he found out he was right. He had discovered she was really a ghost, but she wanted him to help the police to find her body and her murderer. |
posted by angel @ 7:12 pm  |
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A liked the way you chose for this history: a "natural" end!
I'm a pigeon-hearted person ao I don't aprecciate terror stories but when I was reading your story I wasn't afraid! :D
kiss*
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Very nice, this could be interesting to a movie!
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Hum... a title for a possible part 3... "Spiritual Awakening", how about it? lol
I liked that you choosed to follow the supernatural version... it was entertaining to read.
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(Bad idea André...) I like Tania's version the most... It's not scary and its original because it doesn't follow the way people first think of.
~_^ kiss
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A pretty cool ending! =D =D =D
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A liked the way you chose for this history: a "natural" end!
I'm a pigeon-hearted person ao I don't aprecciate terror stories but when I was reading your story I wasn't afraid! :D
kiss*